I quite like this, probably because I dig the Roaring 20s. Loving the hat, and the trousers are enjoyably retro. If you were going for an old-school vibe, you pretty much nailed it.
However, as much as I like the pattern on your tie, I’m still against a tie with a button-down collar. Swap the shirt, and we’re in business. 3.5*, let’s round it up, call it 4*.
Lastly, what shoes are those, Aldens?
Let’s give credit where credit is due. Fit and choice of accessories seem to be good for this particular vintage look. I like hat, glasses, tie and shoes. I wouldn’t wear it myself but it’s well assembled.
This guy nails the looks the majority of the times. I LOVE this picture. Great job in the composition. I dare the ANONyMOUS idiot to identify himself and explain his envy. Je suis artiste, et il me fera tres plaisir de travailler la photographie avec vous MOnsieur!