I like a good trad look, and I can see what you’re going for, but it just needs toning down for me – blue, yellow, green and salmon in one outfit feels a bit much. Unless it’s cold, put your collar down too.
I agree with the comments above. Looks like you are trying a little too hard here. Also, I’m not sure if the clothes are vintage and need to be tailored but they don’t seem to fit that well. Kudos for posting though
Mr. Huntley, enough has been said about the explosion of Spring colors
in your outfit. In regards to the grimace on your face I can understand completely: If the Public Works Department in my town my town painted lamp posts with the same reckless abandon as they do in your town, I’d walk around
looking like I’d been given some bad news too.